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Terevanincu
03-01-2003, 04:56 PM
Tale of a lonesome Adventurer


Chapter 1

He had already penetrated in Athel Loren once before nevertheless he could still feel this impression of novelty as if he had
never seen such scenery. He was amazed at how a forest could seem so lively and yet so deeply asleep. His grey elvish eyes could see far, eventhough it was already dark, yet he felt his sight was diminished. There was something mystical about these woods and he didnt feel at ease but he couldn't go back;he could still hear the tetanizing roar of the orc horde that had been pursuing him for two days now. He knew that his kin lived in these woods and hoped that he could find refuge in the forest. But there he was, alone, or at least he thought he was.
He didn't know if the savage orcs had followed him into the woods or else they had chosen to turn back, for Athel Loren had a reputation and was sinonym of no return for all unpure hearts.
Astaldaer was brave but he knew that what lived in this forest, treemen, dryads, faeries ... was beyond his skills as an archer. Furthermore, he had no grief against the living creatures of this realm. His legs were weakening and since the beginning he knew that his presence hadn't remained unnoticed. He decided to break the silence that was ruling in his surroundings and in elvish he spoke these words: < I am Astaldaer and seek counsel of your king>. Eventhough he got no answer he sensed that he had been heard. He advanced deeper in the woods until he finally reached a clearing. He could see the stars shining in the sky and a feeling of reassurement grew in him.
What he didn't know was that the clearing which seemed to him as a good place to rest his eyes for the night was in fact a holy ground in which had been sown the seed of the Ancients. Such desecration could not remain unpunished.


Chapter 2


Suddenly the forest woke up. The leaves in the wind, which was now blowing in Athel Loren, made a whistling sound and were swirling around the holy clearing entraping Astaldaer who could no longer run away. He could feel the earth quaking under his feet and he could now see dark figures behind the whirlwind of leaves. The creatures entered the clearing, revealing themselves. They were dryads, young trees of human height with a life but no heart. Their anger was driving them blindly towards Astaldaer who was now outnumbered twenty to one. But the dryads didn't charge unlike what the elf expected. They stood there, intimidating him , steady as ice. The whistling
sound ended only to be replaced by a trampling noise. The circle of dryads made space for whatever creature was coming.
Astaldaer was paralysed by fear and the view of his arriving enemy only intensified that feeling. It was three times taller than him and ten times stronger. It was what made this forest so intimidating for strangers; some of the gigantic trees composing the forest could move and were called treemen. A treeman was now face to face with Astaldaer, a fierce look on what could be compared to a face, its fists closed, ready to crush the elf in one strike. The archer was defenseless, how could arrows penetrate suh a scale and even his dagger would no no harm to such toughness. The treeman took a big swing at the elf trying to crush his foe, but Astaldaer, using the small courage he had left managed to leap away. The treeman after a strong roar expressing his anger and aggressivity was ready for his next attack. The plants on the ground took part in the fight and after his leap, Astaldaer was now pinned down by what seemed to be all the roots of the living woods. He was doomed and closed his eyes. When he thought it was the end, he perceived a chant bhind the roar of the huge tree and recognized the tongue of his kin. This gave him the strenght for one last effort and managing to cut free his left hand with hsi dagger he succeeded in dodging the second attack of his opponent . The treeman which had less sharp hearing than the elf heard the singing after his second
attempt to annihilate his foe and the song he heard , he knew very well and stopped fighting. He backed out.
Only the mesmerizing chant of the elves could now be heard and the swirl of leaves was no more .


Chapter 3


It was now time to meet his kindreds who lived in Athel Loren.The firsts he saw were the waywatchers,stealthy rangers skilled in bow and in setting deadly traps that are so well hidden that only people of the woods can distinguish them. They wear cloaks which keep them invisible as long as they are in the trees which were blessed by Ariel, queen of Loren. Their skill in moving silently is the achievement of incredible training and their art in traps is transmitted from waywatcher to waywatcher and even the rest of the wood elves know not their secret. They are proud rangers and none are yet known to have fallen while in their realm.
Astaldaer was invaded by two feelings: amazement and intimidation. He admired these elves that had been following him since his arrival in the forest yet he had noticed nothing. It was uncommon in these days to meet a waywatcher for they never showed themselves to strangers and their encounter should consider it a privilege and so did Astaldaer. One of them, whom was wearing a cloak darker than the others approached him. He spoke not to Astaldaer but with a movement of his arm he drove the stranger into following him. Never had he felt such anxiety while crossing a realm. He was taken to Orion, King of Athel Loren.
The king was impressive though he seemed less lethal than the rangers that had led him here. The strenght of the king was more in his wisdom and leadership than in his strenght which only made him mightier. Orion spoke in a loud and hard voice: < Who are you to risk your life by venturing into my realm?>
"My name is Astaldaer and i entered this forest to seek protection for i was pursued by orcs who had an unsatisfied thirst for blood."
"Terevanincu, leader of the mighty waywatchers has informed me that the orcs have been slain for they fell in his wisely set ambush."
"I am delighted to hear such news"
"Your fate is similar for you have desecrated holy grounds and our law is strict : you will suffer the death penalty. Be honored though for you have heard the singing of the Lady of our realm whom noone had ever heard from the outside world"
"I will not ask mercy for i respect your people and accept the punishment"
"The judgement ended and Astaldaer was taken away while the warhawks in the sky welcomed the King's decision in a storm of piercing cries.
Never had Astaldaer felt so peaceful while in captivity. He was to be executed at dawn.


[Edited on 17/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

[Edited on 20/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

[Edited on 20/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

Seton
03-05-2003, 09:15 PM
Like I said in the Divinitus guild; Good story :exclam:

Good names, good storyline so far, good intro into the world, fairly good description of surroundings/actions (I personaly like to know more to get a better feel of the story).

But what happens now :question: I am eager to read more :D

So far so good, Seton.

CRAM
03-06-2003, 03:43 AM
Nicely done. Very interesting and creative story. I see fantasy novels in your future :)

Terevanincu
03-16-2003, 09:05 PM
Okay guys i finished chapters 4 and 5 ... Here they are :

Chapter 4

The night was one which favoured the dark moon. All the dark forces were roaring for their skills and powers were amplified by the dark moon's magic. Astaldaer's last night alive was going to be long. He could not sleep and so he meditated, remembering events from the past.
But this night was not a casual dark moon night like the others that are witnessed during the year. No, this night was special for the dark moon was full and its darkness was brighter than ever. During that night , the Dark Lord's power was amazingly strong and he used it hand in hand with all his malice. Because such terrible things were accomplished by Morieru the night bears the name of " The night of no limit". Everywhere in Eolea terrible atrocities were commited and despite all the efforts of the light paladins, mages and lords, the dark forces victories were overwhelming. Shadow knights could be seen devastating villages and burning all that beared the mark of Light magic and riding there dark mounts, they led the orc armies into Meena Kalina.
But the dark lord's malice was greater on that night and all the evilness in his soul was not satisfied by just slaughters and bloodbaths of Light followers. Neutral blood had to be shed. And this is how, among others, the wooden realm of Athel Loren was targeted by the dark forces. The dark lord did not want a frontal assault for he knew pf the strenght of the woods. Therefore, he used his telepathic powers and corrupted a pure heart. Such action could only be undertaken under a full dark moon.
And so was Terevanincu enroled in the dark army. Dark blood was now flowing into his veins. His faithful waywatchers followed him for their hearts and souls were linked to those of their leader. The dark rangers division was born and on that night much wood elf blood was shed for the waywatchers notified their betrayal in ruthlessly murdering those that were once their friends into their sleep. But soon the rest of the elves, Orion and Ariel were reorganized and could now face the threat they had never expected. Terevanincu did not want to end it that night and so he refused to lead his rangers in a fight against Orion's people. And so he fled into the northern part of the realm , the one that shared a frontier with Meena Mori, the dark realm. Athel Loren was now no different than the rest of Eolea , it had been divided in two: the Dark adn the Light.
Part of this new dark wooden realm was the oak of imprisonment were Astaldaer was waiting for his execution. And so, Terevanincu and Astaldaer met again.

Chapter 5

Astaldaer was deep in his thoughts and his memories when he received the visit of Terevanincu, now leader of wood elves of Darkened hearts. Terevanincu hoped that Astaldaer would follow him for he wanted to offer such a pure heart to Morieru, the dark Lord as a symbol of his allegiance. And so Terevanincu spoke these words filled with malice:
"We meet again starnger. I have been granted permission by Orion to see you and offer you a chance to repent. Tonight, i am departing on a journey for i have a quest to fulfill in the dark realm. The king would like to guide us for you now much of the realms around Loren and you have ventured in the dark land already once before. Your life can be spared if you decied to help us. So, high elf what is your decision?"
Eventhough this was the first time Terevanincu lied, his dark heart aided him and even the fine hearing of Astaldaer could not notice the change of tone in his voice. But a change in his look he could see. His eyes that had seemed to be brighter than the brightest stars earlier on were now darker than the eyes of a bloodthirsty bat. He looked as mighty as before and Astaldaer was still amazed by the wood elf's appearance. He knew that something had happened, nevertheless, his wish had been granted, his life was spared and he would follow the waywatchers wherever their destination may be. And so he answered:
"Such an honor fills my heart with happiness and i choose to follow and guide you anywhere in Eolea. My sword is yours and i will not fail against the enemy."
And so was Astaldaer lured into venturing into the Dark realm of Meena Mori with Terevanincu and his waywatchers. His life had been spared and he was following his destiny but what awaited him further on, he did not know. Terevanincu was pleased for his trick had worked and soon he would be swearing an oath of allegiance to Morieru, honoured by the sacrifice of a pure-heart.
Their journey began and Astaldaer's feelings were split in two: suspicion and rejoicing.

[Edited on 20/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

IronMonk
03-17-2003, 04:04 AM
very good, i thought you were goign to tell about his life in flash backs? oh hey i just got agreat idea, during a battle,
Terevanincu blessed by the energies of the full dark moon, striking down every foe that came near him. chanting the dark incatations to guide his arrows to their mark time after time, that night, 25 notches wree added to his bow, and after running out of arrows managed to notch his sword 35 times before the batle was over. byt he end Terevanincu, covered in blood yet had no scratch in wich to speak of. and so Terevanincu, sat in the middle of the battlefeild and recalled all the battles of his past, or rather his last life. for Terevanincu was no longer the warrior of the light, he was now Terevanincu the dark ranger.

and I'll leave you to figure out more, feel free to use this in any way you like.

Terevanincu
03-17-2003, 06:45 PM
Well i though of something else actually and you 'll appear in story Iron but i gave up the idea of flashbacks but i guarantee action .
Its coming up soon and for the mean time here's chapter 6 (im not very happy with this one ) :
Chapter 6

The sun was already high in the sky when Terevanincu, Astaldaer and the rest of the dark waywatchers reached the frontier of Meena Mori. The group had been walking for two days and Astaldaer's doubts and anxiety were growing increasingly stronger. His mistrust was soon to be justified. The entrance into the dark realm was guarded by a company of half orcs. Terevanincu and his followers would have gotten rid of them in a fraction of a second but he did not give the order to attack. That confirmed Astaldaer's doubt and it came clear to him that Terevanincu was no longer a servant of Light magc. But he knew of the valor of the waywatchers and the greatness of their skills and therefore that he could not survive a fight against such foes. And so, after a fast thinking, he decided to attack the orcs guarding the path leading into Meena Mori.He charged them and finally showed his true skills for noone knew of his strenght.
Both the orcs and Terevanincu did not expect it. In his charge, Astaldaer had revealed the waywatchers positions and the orcs were ready to charge the wood elves , knowing not that such a kin could be followers of the dark lord . So,Terevanincu ordered his rangers to fire at the orcs and the fight that he did not desire happened , thanks to Astaldaer. Sword in hand, the high elf slaughtered the orcs one after the other and his plan worked. He finally reached the entrance to the dark realm and using the fight as a diversion he fled to the northeast of Meena Mori for he knew a way to reach the human kingdom of Light where he could seek help and protection.
But the waywatchers had no trouble annihilating the orcs and the pursuit was launched straightaway. The supersmell of the elves could trace Astaldaer without any difficulty for the High elf had orc blood on his clothes. Astaldaer was very athletic and so he managed to outrun the rangers but he knew that they would not give up for he had challenged their pride . Soon , he reached a village and he hoped to find somewhere to hide for the night. And so he entered the "Blind Troll Tavern" hiding his clothes under a dark cloak for they beared the symbol of Light.




[Edited on 17/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

[Edited on 20/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

IronMonk
03-17-2003, 11:36 PM
i wouldnt be to dissipointed with the chapter, i cant htink of anything to improve on it with but i think you have a good chapter fo rsetting up a longer one.

Terevanincu
03-18-2003, 07:20 PM
Yep next one is going to be longer but i dont know when i ll finish it ... Its a very important chapter ...

By the way iron , as promised Astaldaer is going to meet Rylan soon , i will send you the story first before posting it here so you can give ur approval...

Danthalas
03-18-2003, 08:54 PM
Very nice Terevanincu. Geez I have been gone a long time. You have converted to dark since I was last here. Kinda sorry to see that but you have a great story going here. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more! I also am entertained with the notion of combining stories and their characters. Nice job.

IronMonk
03-18-2003, 10:05 PM
yah RaFF has already been worked into the story, and you will have your place in the neer future, probly inside of one week from now. it will truly be a great confrontation.

Terevanincu
03-20-2003, 07:23 PM
I finished writing chapter 7 and 8 . All the characters that are featured in those chapters if there is any problem about what i say please tell me so i can edit story .
Thanks, hope u like it ...

Chapter 7

The "Blind troll Tavern owed its name to its owner. He was a 7 feet half troll who was blind to many things. Everyone was welcome, well, everyone but Lights and welcome as welcoming as a troll can be. In the tavern reigned a strong stink of combined vomit, urine and rot. The rotten smell came from the food for troll food wasnt very reknown in those days. In front of the entrance was the bar where a crowd of dwarves waiting to be served and they were far from waiting in line. In fact, the first to be served was often the strongest. Behind the bar was the owner, Grosbaf and Astaldaer adressed him :
"Hey there, i need a room and some Arvandor'lame" . Arvandor'lame was the beloved weed of the dark elves and Astaldaer thought that this would be enough to hide his alignment. Grosbaf answered ina true trollish fashion, hitting the counter with his closed fist asking for money. Astaldaer took a few copper coins from his pocket and threw them on the counter and with a determined voice he said:
" The rest when i leave"
It was enough for Grosbaf. And so Astaldaer went in the darkest corner of the room to smoke his newly bought Arvandor'lame and to escape questioning looks.
But soon what was going on as planned turned into a nightmare and Astaldaer found trouble again. As every night, a dwarf thinking he was mightier than his fellows, tries harder than other to get some ale. On that night, the dwarf was actually mightier than the others, he was a great warrior and used his small corpulence at his own advantage. He was named Cram. but even a mighty dawrf , when drunk can t compete with the strenght of Grosbaf. And his attempt to crawl over the counter was welcomed by the half troll by a gigantic strike. And the blow was so huge that the dwarf went flying across the room to land on the table in front of Astaldaer which shattered in pieces. And eventhough the elf showed no expression on his face, Cram yelled to him while his kinsmen started fighting the rest of the tavern's clients:
"Who are you looking at skinny elf ?"
"I do not seek trouble and meant no offence to you or your kin"Astaldaer replied
"Never trust an elf !!! " shouted Cram while charging the elf with his heavy twinaxe. In order to parry , the high elf had no choice but to throw away his cloak and draw his broadsword , revealing his Light avatar.
Meanwhile, in the streets around the tavern, Terevanincu and his menwere searching for their foe. And it's at the corner of a narrow and gloomy street that Terevanincu entered a big square where some other business was going on. He found himself to be in the middle of a guild counsel. In a fraction of a second he was encircled. The dark counsel members all wore the same emblem and Terevanincu could read SoF ...


Chapter 8

Never had Terevanincu felt so anxious for thepeople surrounding him inspired power. he didn't know if he could win against one of them but he was sure that he could not defeat all of them t once. They said nothing during what seemed to Terevanincu like several minutes. It looked as if they were evaluating his strenght. One of them, a tall dark elf wearing a long robe and holding a wooden staff that revealed his mightiness spoke for all of them , his name was Bluenose:
"You have been the witness of a secret counsel and our guild does not allow it. For this, you will pay with your life."
My life is not something you have power over. And if you want it, it is going at the cost of the lives of several of your members for I am not a foe to underestimate. I am Terevanincu, leader of the waywatchers of the wooden realm of Loren and I will honour my kin until i meet my end."
And swords were drawn. Bows were stringed. Staff were heldd high , ready to redirect their owners powers who were ready to incant. Strong protecting auras were revealed and the square was now flooded by an atmosphere of doom. The fight started, Terevanincu fred two arrows at once and it took all the willpower of Bluenose andof the other leader of Soldiers of Fortune , Delta to divert the arrows. One of the 2 still managed to hit Whiteblade, fierce mage of SoF. And as a result, Whiteblade released his anger and cast a destructive power bolt towards the dark waywatcher who was now in hand to hand combat using his sharp dagger. The blt hit Terevanincu in the back and the ranger went down. But suddenly, a strong voice interrupted the fight:
"Stop at once and step away from him "
The SoF members turned around and saw that things were getting more complicated. The waywatchers had regrouped and had now encircled the ones that were fighting their leader. They were ready to fire at these newly made enemies. Never had SoF been caught offguard like this. But the rangers fired not for Terevanincu in a low-shaking voice ordered them not to. The fighting was over. Terevanincu's new born dark soul was now sensing that SoF was what he was seeking since he had turned to the Dark. He desired power and wished to erase his past when he was never seen by his foes and when his popularity did not get past Loren's frontiers. He wanted to be feared by the Light. And so he spoke:
"I have ben the witness of one of your councils and for such an act i deserve death apparently. But the problem can be solved in another manner. You have impressed me with your skills and your pride. may i join your ranks so that together we can destroy the light ?"
"We have seen your valor and know that you have what it takes to become a SoF member. You seek power, don't you ? Then your offer is accepted and as from today you are a Soldier of Fortune. Do not deceive me, my friend " Bluenose spoke .
And so Terevanincu joined the guild which had decided to killl him. But for once , the waywatchers did not follow him for their darkened spirit was not as strong as their leader's and they did not seek power. The waywatchers chose to return to Loren and defend the new dark side of the woods. They saluted their leader and their friend one last time and departed.

[Edited on 20/3/2003 by Terevanincu]

Bluenose
03-21-2003, 02:41 PM
:D very nice,

Only thing is i wd have kiled u and all ur puny wee friends with nothing but a thought ;)

heh v nice

Terevanincu
03-21-2003, 07:33 PM
Im sure some people liked the dwarf tossing right Cram ???