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Revalence
03-19-2003, 08:33 AM
I belong where the land is red and the sun is scorches
Where the sky reaches for space and blinds with awe
I belong where the road stretches forever and leads to freedom
I belong in the land of the dinosaurs in a time forgotten
Waiting for you to remember me
So I can roam free


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I wrote that during church last sunday i dont know if its any good but thats what i was fealing at the time. And i felt i should share it with you.
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EDIT:
No double posting, please.


[Edited on 19/3/2003 by eg0]
IronMonk
03-19-2003, 08:46 AM
thats very good, i unfortunatly lost my abilities to wright poetry a while back, but do write more and enter them in the literary contest, wright a song if you want, you could wright an epic.
Revalence
03-19-2003, 08:56 AM
I've never really tryed to write anything els but poetry, and your the 1st person that has said they like one of my pomes. I'm glad you like it, i've never shared my pomes with strangers before. And sence you like it i might share more.

[Edited on 19/3/2003 by Revalence]
IronMonk
03-19-2003, 08:59 AM
please do, another good thing is you may just be alone in the poety part of the writeing contest going on.
Azrial
03-20-2003, 07:54 AM
hahaha, we can't have that eh, i'll write one in the weekend soon... just for a little competition, and how many places r there per compettion? 1, 2 or 3
~Ice~
03-22-2003, 04:06 PM
good poems Revalence! send in somemore
DivZ3r0
03-22-2003, 04:32 PM
im not a poem guy, but i really like this one! good work, very nice
~Ice~
03-23-2003, 02:36 PM
SEE its good even DivZ3r0 likes it
DivZ3r0
03-23-2003, 02:43 PM
lol@ICE :P
~Ice~
03-24-2003, 11:27 AM
:hallucine: why does everyone laugh at me.... ;)
*Ice is not sad, he's waiting for his prey to answer* :D
DivZ3r0
03-24-2003, 11:30 AM
we atleast I laugh at you because you are funny . . . sometimes :calim: