Somewhere between the realms of earth and sea...

[Revalence]

Somewhere between the realms of earth and sea
There is a doorway
Somewhere beyond the dusty trail of a dying star
A world of silence awaits
A cry
A breath
The sound of life
A new light
Suspended in a breathless absence of wind
On the edge
of time



This is one i wrote on a road trip from texas to cali i wrote a few others too but this one i like the best.

[Danthalas]

I like it. Brief but thought provoking. Nice job Revalence! Keep em coming!

[IronMonk]

yes, and to all you other poets out there get them in the forums so that Revalence, can have some competition in the poem division of the contest. also there is also a song section to work with. go ahead and go mad with your creativity so that this contest gets really big. i assure you that the prizes will be well worth the effort of wrighing a story. also im not shure but there may be a grafics competition coming up too. check with eg0 about it though

[Revalence]

well if you look at things as a poet you will know that all poetry is a song from your soul. You can take almost any pome and turn it into a song or fable.

[Sproth]

awesome dude keep them comin i want more

[~Ice~]

hmm another good poem from you i like the other 2 that you posted here! good job, keep sending more

[Clover]

That poem made no fking sense...

[Seton]

Too bad your great poems are lost on some people :(

And if you don't like it you don't have to let everybody know Clover

[Edited on 23/3/2003 by Seton]

[DivZ3r0]

if he thinks it makes no sence, hes not that smart ;) because there is a tale of hope in the poem but u need to have some brains to figure that out, not much but some :P

Anyway, nice poem

[~Ice~]

for the people who did get lost, didnt it seem like it was a good poem! even thought some of you were lost and bedazzeld from it.. i got confused by a poem once but i still thought it was good :)

[Edited on 24/3/2003 by ~Ice~]

[Revalence]

well sorry i coulnt please you cloud my pomes are not for every one but this one is about hope its about finding your way but i dont expect every one to understand what goes one in side my head but every one is open to there own opinions.

[~Ice~]

i understood :)

[blue_fire]

hm, is there going to be a fable writing contest? how can i enter a submission?