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Revalence
03-21-2003, 07:17 PM
love tears at your soul
screams for embrace
rushes to your heart
slips away in a swirl of dust
and echoes to the past with a soft whisper
it's a fragrance of madness
carried away in a desert land
breathless and frantic
alone and scared
until it meets with destiny...

This is about a girl i met in Az. Also i put one of my pomes in my signature. And i might be going away for a long time so i maybe have a month left here. depends on how fast my leg heals.

Terevanincu
03-21-2003, 07:34 PM
very nice , keep it up !

~Ice~
03-22-2003, 03:57 PM
keep it up, good work

IronMonk
03-23-2003, 03:10 AM
great stuff

Sproth
03-23-2003, 06:30 AM
dude that roxs u r a good poet
!!!!!
Sproth

~Ice~
03-23-2003, 06:17 PM
waiting to see more of these