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Lord_Paladin
03-09-2005, 10:54 AM
There was a somber mood cast over the candle lit tavern, but then winter often had such effects of the moods of a people. There was something about the oppressive skies and chilling winds that seemed to bring the introvert out in everyone…

“Another round on me! For everyone!” The repugnant fellow at the far table said, amidst happy cheers from the drunken followers he had amassed.

Well… everyone that wasn’t drunk.

Galin bent his neck against the cold wind that rushed in through the main door of the inn common room as it was opened. The newcomer took a moment to shake the fresh snow form his cowl and boots before closing the door behind them. A moment later he dropped himself at the table with his two brothers.

“What did you find?” Dayn asked, his voice level.

“Nothing new, but it seems the stories were true. Or home is no more.” Alric, the youngest, said as he motioned for one of the serving girls to bring him something warm to drink.

“Couldn’t you have found a table closer to the fireplace? It’s as cold as home out there!” Alric was already smirking even as the words left his mouth.

“Then why are you complaining, little brother? You were always the one who ran outside before his snow clothes were all on.” Galin held back his laughter by taking another swig of his spiced wine.

Dayn watched the faces of his older and younger brother; though they put on a brave face they were just as worn as he was. The fires of their home still plagued all of them in their sleep, but it seems that had… outrun… the news of what happened. He still could not believe what had happened to them over the last three nights. It was a whirlwind of emotion, and hazy, half remembered events. Fire, shouting, swords, and blood; it was as if some horrible bard’s tale had come to life, and all they could remember was the music of the moments.

“What should we do now, Galin?” Alric looked to the eldest of them for guidance, but Galin didn’t know any better now then they did yesterday.

“I don’t know, little brother. Father always talked about his cousin who married some lord out here, but since she took on the lord’s name… I don’t know how to find her, or even if she would help us…”

“Well, we must come up with something quick. Our coin is running low, and if the storm keeps us as it has been, there will be little work for us to find.” Dayn said over the rim of his goblet. He watched Galin and Alric share a glance between them before staring into the bottoms of their mugs. They had all been changed by what happened.

Dayn took the lull in their conversation to run through their situation once more. During the chaos of the attack their father, injured and bleeding in their room, shouting for them to rise and flee, roused them from their slumber. To the sounds of battle they had managed to grab their swords, and Alric his bag before they stormed out of their door with barely enough time for clothes. At the moment, all they had were their worn, and very plain working clothes, which thankfully meant they had enough to protect them from the snows of winter. What is also meant was that no one would take them for the lordlings they were. On top of that, it wasn’t like they could go to a bank and draw money on their torched castle in an entirely separate kingdom. For some reason, Galin had kept the presence of mind at the time to load up their saddlebags with some rations and a few other necessities that were kept in the stables before they rode for their lives. Twelve of their father’s best guards died getting them to the temple safely.

The way they were sitting at their table, Galin and Alric had their backs to the door, and Dayn sat opposite them with his back to the innkeeper. They were halfway through the common room, so anyone coming through the door would have had to come a good ways to go between the door and reaching them. It was a measure of Dayn’s distraction that a man, with an obviously possessed look on his face, and a hand resting on a short sword, could have made it within two arms length of them before he noticed. To be honest, it must have been pure luck that he even noticed. Were it not for the pop of a log in the fireplace, Dayn wouldn’t have noticed the orange glow of the fire on bared steel. It was Galin, however, that reacted first, noticing the look of surprise on Dayn’s usually thoughtful face. Putting an arm to Alric, Galin pushed them both out of the way and off the bench as a sword blade came crashing down between them. Dayn reached for his sword before he realized that both his and Galin’s blades were upstairs in their room. Cursing himself a fool, he stood up on his bench and threw himself at their attacker before he could right his balance. At the sudden commotion of the common room, its occupants immediately stood up, which meant Dayn and the assailant went crashing through bench of the table behind them. Stunned for a moment by the crash, Dayn rolled off, or rather was pushed off, of the man with the sword as he tried to stand once more. Slightly dazed by the unexpected movement of the room, he took a moment to look for his pray, which gave Alric the precious time he needed to stand and draw his sword.

“Why—why are you after us?!” Alric yelled at the man, holding his sword in a nervous two hands. Neither of them had had any –real- combat experience. They had only sparred with each other and the guards, never when their life was really in danger, and they had never taken a life before. The assassin whirled about, facing Alric and bringing his sword about in an attempt to cut the youngest in half. Raising his blade to block the blow, Alric staggered backwards from the force of the blow and his own nerves. Shaking his head and coming to his feet, Dayn got ready to try and punch the man as hard as they could when suddenly Galin appeared, a chair raised over his head and grunting as he brought it down of the back of the man’s head. With a loud crunch and a thud the small battle was over, their opponent lying unconscious on the ground.

It was a dazed moment before the brothers were all standing again, admiring their handiwork.

“All in all, for our first fight, we didn’t do half bad!” Alric chimed in, trying to break the silence. He was instead met by a level look from both Dayn, and Galin. It was then that they realized everyone was looking at them funny. Dayn’s eyes met Galin, and he nodded, the three of them wordlessly headed up to their rooms to talk more of this in private.

“Uh… put it on our tab?” Alric said with an anxious look to the innkeeper, whose wide eyes was still surveying the damage from his stool by the fire.


To be continued…

Lord_Paladin
03-10-2005, 10:25 AM
Dreary gray light filtered through the windows of their small room as the three bothers sat on their beds to talk. There were really only two beds, which meant they had to share some nights. Galin took a moment to go over to the window and look outside, though all you could see was a grayscale world, all covered in snow. Alric chose to lay back in one of the beds, while Dayn crossed his arms and leaned on the door.

“So what do you think that was all about?” Alric asked putting his hands behind his head and stretching.

“I don’t know… but they were after us, specifically… and it’s not like we carry a lot of money…” Galin leaned his head to his arm, pressing it against the frost-covered window and let out a world-weary sigh. He eyes were watching the few people come and go on the snowy streets, struggling against the wind and slow as they plodded their way along.

Dayn kept his eyes on the floor, he had heard the man mutter something, but he wasn’t sure what he was supposed to make of it. It might explain everything, or just be nothing.

“I… heard him say something when I tackled him,” Dayn said slowly, almost hesitantly. He heard his two brothers shift so that they could look at him expectantly. Dayn shrugged, suddenly uncomfortable under their inquisitive gaze.

“When you dove aside and he missed you with his sword… I heard him mutter something…” Dayn cast his eyes back down the ground, still mulling it over in his mind. “He said, ‘Damn Braves’ under his breath…” Dayn frowned, realizing how stupid it sounded, what could people have against Braves? He had heard of people stereotyping races before, but never and outright hatred to the point of trying to kill them. It had always been, “hey, it’s a half troll, he must be strong and stupid.” The truth of the matter aside, the fact that someone wanted to kill them because they were Braves was just… inconceivable! The blank stare from his brothers agree with his sentiments… it was so bizarre, that they couldn’t even understand what he meant.

“Never mind, it was just nothing.” He said softly, going back to running things through his mind.

“Well, whatever the cause, I don’t think he was acting on his own.” Galin once again returned his eyes to the view. Dayn raised an eyebrow at his older brother’s word, and Alric sat up straight.

“What do you mean you don’t think he was acting alone?!” Alric cried out, surprised, and probably afraid.

“We’ve only been here three days, and we haven’t made any enemies. Not only that, but he was specifically after the three of us. Someone knows who we are, and they want us dead. This guy was just the pawn.” Galin sighed, the warmth of his breath frosting on the window.

Dayn nodded idly, his eyes dropping to the floor as he working things out in his mind. Discrimination, assassinations from the shadow… what kind of place was this? He supposed, if you wanted someone to die without any sort of real investigation, you take advantage of someone with open intentions, and who was expendable. People would look at the deaths, attribute it to some sort of hate crime, and maybe track it back to the grunt that was expendable anyways. The only problem then would be keeping the grunt quiet, but then, people whose minds are filled with hate are often easily manipulated into doing something without realizing they’re being controlled. But why would someone go through such lengths to kill them? They were just three harmless kids… what difference did they really make, especially without a kingdom? Dayn let out a long sigh, and silence drifted through the room for the rest of the evening.

Once evening came around, it was decided that it would be best to eat their meal in their room until they knew more about what was going on. Alric went down stairs to grab their food from the kitchen and to talk to the innkeeper about earlier, while Galin and Dayn remained in the room.

“What do you think we should do?” Galin was still perched at the window, staring out into the snow, it was evening now, so people on the street were rare.

“It seems we have overstayed our welcome. I think it would be best to leave and move to a city that may be… less dangerous…” Dayn moved over the window to look outside, frowning at weather. They no longer had the three Pegasus that brought them there, and this wasn’t the weather to head out on foot. But then, was there a good weather to die in?

“How? We don’t have enough coin for a horse, let alone a dodo!” Galin clenched his teeth and sighed, pressing his forehead to the glass of the window.

“Well… we could hire ourselves out as guards for whoever is going in our direction?” Dayn suggested, the idea wasn’t pleasant, but it would put them with a caravan, and give them shelter. That and there was more safety traveling with a large number of people then on their own across this snow. As used to the snow as they were, it was a long way until somewhere safe was found. They had to get away from Al Drifa… somewhere the dark’s forces couldn’t get to them. Leaning his arm on the frame, the two older brothers watch the quiet street in silence waiting for Alric to come back with their food.

“And just how do we do that? Do you think anyone is really going to leave with the weather like this?” Dayn grunted quietly at Galin’s retort, knowing he was right. They could only do so many chores for the innkeeper to work off part of their stay, and after what happened in the common room, he figured they wouldn’t be getting any discounts for a while.

“Hey Dayn, is that the same gu—“

“I see it too.” Dayn and Galin glanced at each other, their eyes meeting worriedly.

Grabbing their swords and quickly strapping them on, the two brothers burst out of the room and almost flew down the stairs, when they reached the bottom, Dayn crashed into the pungent follow who was buying everyone drinks earlier. As ale and drink flew everywhere, amidst the overly dramatic bellow of the drunk man, the focus of the room suddenly changed two the two brothers. Galin walked down the last few steps slowly, his eyes scanning the room. It was only a moment before the load roar of the annoyed patrons Dayn had just crashed into stood up, clamoring about the injustice done.

“I am sorry sir, I truly am… let me help you with that…”

Galin moved out from behind Dayn and further into the common room, he couldn’t see Alric for some reason…

*Crash*

Galin looked over to the far side of the room where one of the serving girls had dropped another glass in the excitement of the moment. And it was because of that Galin could see the hallway behind her, leading out to the stables. The back of his brother Alric was moving off to the tables, while another figure walked closely behind his brother, his hand to Alric’s back. Quickly, Galin started pressing through the room, leaving Dayn to try and deal with the situation as best he could.

As Galin made the hallway, the lights of the candles flickered against the breezes from outside, their dancing making the way seem more ominous. Once free of the crowd, Galin charged down the small hallway to the stable. As he prepared to burst through the door, he found something was blocking it. Quickly checking the bolt and lock, they were both open. The man must have put something in front of the door. Taking a few steps back, Galin ran forward, throwing his shoulder into the charge and knocking the door halfway off it’s hinges. No, the Innkeeper wasn’t going to happy about this. Taking another couple of steps back, Galin threw himself at the door once again, this time taking it off it’s hinges and carrying him through the doorway and over the box that was blocking it. Staggering to hands and knees, Galin looked up to see the man that had been herding his brother away from the inn. While getting to his feet, Galin looked around and say no sign of a stable boy... hopefully he was either unconscious or bribed.

“Let go of my brother!” Galin said sternly, drawing on that authority father had tried to teach him. There was a slick, steely sound as Galin drew his sword from it’s sheath and held it before him.

“If you let my brother go, I’ll let you get away unharmed.” Galin said, keeping his confidence, like he had the upper hand here. His eyes scanned the stables, looking for anymore of the assassins that might be lurking behind something. Would Dayn hurry up already?


To be continued...

(and constructive critisism appreciated)

PhantasyIV
03-11-2005, 07:16 AM
Okay, I spotted a couple small surface errors, but I get my fair share of those too. Otherwise good.

DreLefty
03-11-2005, 04:40 PM
That’s a good story Paladin, you should continue it. Interesting twist to have people chasing braves to. Not a race you would expect to be under persecution. I mean anyone hunting demi god's must have interesting motives. Keep it up.

bedlamite
03-12-2005, 08:26 PM
* Aye, there is plenty of motive...

- You should not believe these stinkin "Braves", they know more than they are letting on. I am infuriated to read these whelps acting as if they have no idea what is going on - they MUST have been taught the history, it was their 'people' who started all this after all.
- Consider this a warning to all you filth abominations calling yourselves 'Braves', and any who might sympathize or harbor your ilk - we will hunt you down, rout you out, and destroy any place you might hide. We are the justice for your crimes, and we shall destroy you all.


* All that aside - it really is a good start to a great story, and I look forward to more. Keep up the good work Lord_Paladin. (Hope that I wasn't TOO hard on ya there... stinkin brave.)

jim_pugh
03-21-2005, 07:37 PM
Nice Story, very good.

Do you like mine

Hunt (http://www.darkandlight.net/forums/showthread.php?t=14655)

Claw (http://www.darkandlight.net/forums/showthread.php?t=14672)

Lord_Paladin
11-09-2005, 02:11 AM
*gives this post a slight bump so he can find it*

I think i'm going to start working on this again

Lord_Paladin
11-10-2005, 05:43 AM
Btw, if there is anyone interested in a cameo in this story, please IM with pertinent details of your character and I'll see about working you in somwehere