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Seton
03-25-2003, 08:44 PM
Yep found some time for this today at work. Don't think they are as good as my first one though.

Trapped, waiting....

Silently sitting in a cage
Wanting to escape
But why should I try?
Will I be tortured?
Will I be embraced?
Time passes slowly
As a snail going up a wall
Thoughts running through my head
It doesn't matter
Time will answer my question

Being a friend

Is being a Helper
Is being an Educator
Is being a Listener
Is being a Protector

Is being a Watcher
Is being an Advisor
Is being a Sharer

Is being THERE

H.E.L.P. W.A.S. THERE ;)

~Ice~
03-25-2003, 09:54 PM
top one is ok
dont really like the bottom one

Seton
03-26-2003, 07:39 PM
The second one, isn't really a poem, but I just thought I'll post it anyway :P

Revalence
03-26-2003, 08:16 PM
the 1st one is good and the 2nd one ant a pome but is a nice (cant think of the word to use) thing about friend ship.

Seton
03-27-2003, 08:42 PM
Thanx Revalence

kickassman
04-27-2003, 11:18 PM
i dont think the freind is to good the waiting is better but i guess maybe if you were a teacher you could give to your students

Seton
04-30-2003, 06:05 PM
I'm sorry Kickassman, I don't understand. If I were a teacher, what would I give to my students??? The Trapped, waiting poem???