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Serenity
06-06-2003, 02:32 AM
It all began with a battle between a clan of wood elves and a small village of humans on the outskirts of Ganareth. The battle was fierce and many were killed or wounded. The chaos ended deep in the woods of the elves and bodies dotted the forest floor. But near a small creek there was movement. One of the wounded humans was inching his way toward the creek. He managed to lay right next to it, stretch out his hand, dip it in to the cool water, but before he could take a drink, he collapsed from exhaustion.
* * * * * *
He was awoken by a soft touch on his forehead. He opened his eyes and saw a beautiful young elf with green eyes. Panic raced through him and he tried to reach for his sword but she quickly placed her other hand on his arm. All of his fear and anger passed away. “ I am here to help you human,” and at that he passed out again.
* * * * * *
Weeks passed and the young elf nursed the human back to health. Soon enough a relationship between them was born, and so was a baby girl. Amongst their joy and happiness was fear. They knew they could never leave their home by the creek. Both of their kind would never understand their love.
* * * * * *
A year passed and their tranquility was broken when a hunting party of elves discovered them. They surprised the young family and killed the young mother on the spot. The man quickly grabbed his daughter and ran toward his old home in the village. When he had returned to the village, he was questioned by the villagers about his disappearance and about the child. He explained that he was a prisoner of the elves along with other humans. One was a woman who had a child while in prison. The elves were going to kill her and the child. They killed the mother but before they could kill the child he saved her and ran away. The villagers accepted his story and raised her as a human. He named her Serenity for that was the feeling he had when he was with her mother. Growing up wasn’t easy for the half-elf. She looked and acted different than the other children. Adults and children started rumors and teased her. For his daughter’s well being he started training her in the ways of the warrior. She excelled in it but it wasn’t in her timid nature to be a fighter. Then puberty hit and her elfish features became more prominent. The villagers couldn’t allow an elf, even a half-elf, to live in their village. One night a mob came to their home screaming “Elf lover!” and “Bastard child!”
The man awoke in terror. He knew what they had planned for his beloved daughter. He shook her awake and helped her out of a window. “Father?”
“Quickly, Serenity, run to the woods. You will be safe. I love you, don’t forget that!”
She hesitated a moment then turned to start running. She only went two steps when she heard her father’s screams. She ran and ran, deeper and deeper into the woods. Her legs ached her and she had to stop. She slowed down and noticed a small creek. She studied it. It seemed very familiar to her. She bent down to take a drink when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around to see a young female elf with green eyes smiling at her. She smiled back.
* * * * * *
Years passed and the young elf taught Serenity the ways of the healer elves. She learned of the light and of love. She learned to let go of her hatred and forgive those who killed her father. “But what about your mother?”
“ I know nothing of my mother. Only that she was beautiful and kind. It pained my father to speak of her.”
She smiled. “ I knew her. She was a wood elf. A healer. She saved your father’s life, and yours.”
“What?”
“She died by the hands of her clan, because she loved a human and their child.”
“Please tell me more….”
“No, sweet one. I think you are ready to see the world. I have taught you all I know. Darkness is rising more and more each day in other parts of this world. Heal the world, Serenity. Go show them the Light.”
And then she slowly faded away. Serenity smiled and stood up. She gathered some food and some belongings into a bag. She then turned and looked toward the sun. She would follow it into the unknown.

neorapsta
06-06-2003, 10:35 AM
Very good story. Bravo!! :)

TheHazzard
06-06-2003, 01:51 PM
Nice story love it ;)

Serenity
06-06-2003, 03:09 PM
Well thank you guys. I worked very hard on it so I was hoping for positive feedback. Some credit goes to the Soliders of Fortune though. Their stories inspired me to write my own. ;)

Tubalcain
06-06-2003, 04:01 PM
Excellent story! it has quite a cinematic feel to it the way you advance the plot. Also like the resonance of the creek revisited. :thumbup:

Serenity
06-06-2003, 08:06 PM
--blushes as she reads what Tubalcain wrote-- Thank you.

Reon
06-12-2003, 09:07 PM
Serenity,

I love your story. You have to give this to Kalico to post on the site.

Hope to see you soon.

Fhman
06-12-2003, 09:37 PM
I liked the story.

One thing. How come they killed her mother for consorting with a human but not Serenity for being a half elf ?

Perhaps that is in the story to come...

It would alos be nice if you developed Serenity a bit more. Show what she is thinking and her likes/dislikes. Make her a bit more 3D.

I look forward to reading more

Serenity
06-13-2003, 01:29 AM
Thanks Reon, I hope to see you around too. ;)

To Fhman: I guess it wasnt explained very well, sorry. But her father grabbed her before they could kill her and her father, which they would have. Plus, the villagers would have killed her if her father hadnt gotten her out of the house in time. Her parents both sacraficed their lives for her. These sacrifices influenced her to become a cleric and help others so that her parents' deaths wouldnt be in vain. I also didnt go into detail about what she was thinking because her life really doesnt start until she goes out into the unknown. Her father protected her her whole life and she didnt have to think for herself. so I guess we will all have to wait till beta to see what happens. Stay tuned!

Quintin
06-13-2003, 02:55 AM
GREAT STORY, Way to be! ;)

*AFLAK*

Pistols
06-13-2003, 05:28 AM
Yeah, great story Serenity. V. cool.
Welcome to the irc channel too. ;)

windwalker
06-13-2003, 07:30 AM
Very nice story.

/me wonders what awaits in the unknown. ;)

neorapsta
06-15-2003, 06:31 PM
Yes, we need some more...

/me waits for unsuspecting Windwalker in the unknown

windwalker
06-16-2003, 06:32 AM
More would be nice.

/me is'nt unsuspecting,but confused,and maybe a lil concerned now.?! ;)

Catz
06-16-2003, 12:33 PM
I like your story :), perhaps go to my page and write your self into my library ?

Shazi
06-16-2003, 12:47 PM
Nice story you got there :)

RookieLeader
06-16-2003, 01:22 PM
Nice one right!!!

And good job too : not so easy to write such a long story without breaking links between events and forget details... Very nice Isay.

(scuze for my poor english)

Braaaah_de_Pit
06-18-2003, 01:08 AM
Nice story.. Keep on writing ;)

Bluenose
06-19-2003, 04:39 PM
V nice senerity, for a follower of the light ;)

Glad our stories inspired you. Is there more comming?

Serenity
06-20-2003, 03:49 AM
Definity. I just finished part 2 so it will be appearing on the boards soon!