Do you know your soul?

[Revalence]

Here is a new pome i wrote in while away in moab.

I belong where the land is red and the sun scorches
Where the sky reaches for space and blinds with awe
I belong where the road stretches forever and leads to freedom
In the souls that hurt and the hearts that bleed
I belong in the land of dinosaurs in a time forgotten
Waiting for you to remember me
So i can roam free

[neorapsta]

Very nice poem Revalence!

[Revalence]

thanks.

[Fazun]

yeah i liked that poem too ...

mmmm and i feel stoned enough to try my first dnl poem ehehehe

dark and light, the conflict oh so old
a place you get your soul easily sold
with fierce battles forgin the future
the looser beein led to the rupture

[Tweakish]

I don't know much about poetry, and I don't get that last line. I did a search on dictionary.com and I couldn't find anywhere rupture rhyming with future.

[Fazun]

yeah, i had some swiss-german slang in my mind ehehehe i shouldn't translate such stuff with babelfish i guess ,)

it's like the loosers (of those battles) are beein separated from the rest (of the community or whatever) or killed and stuff ... .)

arg, i thought it sounded nice ehehehe

[Danmann]

Hark! Dost Thou Hear That?
The Scream was just out of earshot but the implication was clear....
Death by the Beast...
Hunter turned Hunted....
Shell I run? Risk a Backward Glance?
In the End it won't matter...
If you Hide....I will find you
If you Flee....I will Hunt you
If you Fight............
I will DEVOUER YOU!