THE WATERFALL

[BrandonDom.]

THE WATERFALL
By Brandon Rosales
THIS IS AN RP story that will forever be continued.


Beyond vast lands of the dodoland,lived a lost boy under a waterfall.He was scared,and so confused he had forgotten his name.The only company he had under his cold stone was a young dodo.He and his dodo united at the ship on sea.After been halled off boat by a storm,he was afloated by a most likely companian,a dodo.But now they were alone.Wet and cold,they waited...and waited...and waited...

Meanwhile a man adrift off sea was unconsous and sad.There lie man over sea not far from the island.When a troll stompped by and found the body floating in low-tide water. :mad2: the troll got mad and shook the human furiously. :mad: The man woke up with a :o cough.

Then, ANOTHER troll found a sleeping boy and a dodo.That troll picked up the boy who was sleeping and the dodo and was off to his cave with his roommate waiting in the cave.

The troll looked at the human in his cave,waiting for his roommate .The human was awake and frightened,and then the troll asked:WHY ARE YOU HERE
The man man replied:I DON"T KNOW HOW I GOT HERE BUT I was SEARCHING FOR MY LOST SON."

to be continued if anyone replies with a comment.

[Roin]

Okay, one thing, it is not descriptive at all..

"Then, ANOTHER troll found a sleeping boy and a dodo.That troll picked up the boy who was sleeping and the dodo and was off to his cave with his roommate waiting in the cave."

this leaves me wondering... was the troll in starvation, was the boy scared? what happened?!?!?

"At the same time, a different troll, starving from the low stocks of food, found the scared sleeping boy and his dodo. The boy was curled into a ball, shivering. His hair, brown and shaggy, lie on the floor where a dodo slept. The hungry troll picked up the frightened boy, who was startled and awake, and the dodo and was off to his cave where his roommate waited."

Okay, so mine sucks, but im just making a point... Its not descriptive and leaves me making up appearances which are probably wrong

[Cheese_Mouse]

well, i'll keep the story going...

The kid and his dodo sat in the cave, waiting for the chance to strike. The troll was watching them carefully, but tired after wandering the beaches. Slowly, the troll fell asleep. The child too this chance and took the club from his hand.

*WHAP*

The club came down on the trolls head making him pass out. A small trickel of blood came from his lips. The boy jumped onto his dodo, in search of his father.

Suddenly he stopped at the shore. Imprinted in the sand was a human shape. The boy jumped off his dodo and set his hand in the markings... "Father" he said. The imprint showed that he must have been dragged across the beach and into the woods. The boy hopped back onto his bird and they continued their search in the direction of the markings. Little did they know what awaited them in that deep, dark forest...


Toon in next post for the continuation of "The Waterfall"

[Danmann]

He can follow your Scent
You emit the taint of fear from every gland
till it trickles off you on to the trodden earth....
He is Near...Do not Fear....Embrace Oblivion
The Beast Awaits you my friend...
Will you answer......Maybe.....