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-Grish-
07-31-2003, 05:03 AM
I hopped up on my elerphunt
An' whacked him on the noggin
He gave a beller an' a grunt
An' started off a joggin'

Head askew, he raised his trunk
An' with his one good eye
He gave a look all full of spunk
That said, "I hopes you die!"

Now elerphunts are cagey beasts
With spitefull little minds
Don't ever trust one in the least
Or trouble you will find

I knowed that he was thinkin'
To rebel against the man
Who rode that poor ol' stinkin'
Elerphunt across the land

From the South I rode that beast
To Northern lands remote
From the West into the East
On trails unfit for goats

I knew all his little tricks
An' his wily ways
So with my boot I gave some kicks
An' turned aside his gaze

Through the blazing heat I ride
Up ahead I sees a tree
He contrives to drift our course aside
So limbs will knock me free

But I weren't born just yesterday
I ducks an' holds the pose
The branches miss me clean away
But, HE'S GOT ME WITH HIS NOSE!

He pulls me off an' throws me down
An' tries to dance upon my head
I twist an' turn an' rolls around
I know he wants me dead

"Ungratefull, mangy pachyderm"
I shout in the ear that still is there
These stupid beasts they never learn
To love my kindly care

I dodge around his blind side
An' gets behind the tree
I'm fearin' I might lose my ride
An' elerphunts ain't free

I thinks to grab his tail
An' climb up on his rump
Alas, my plan is no avail
All that's left there is a stump

A scraggly, gnarled critter
If I weren't mad I think I'd laugh
Why does he act so bitter
When I raised him from a calf

An' now he limps off squeelin'
I'll have to start the hunt
For that beast most unappealin'
...My selfish elerphunt

NAAR
07-31-2003, 07:01 AM
That is, quite possibly, the STRANGEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ

*shakes head* :o

darkpadden
08-03-2003, 10:53 AM
thats alittle odd

TheHazzard
08-03-2003, 11:59 AM
Ye its "strange", but still its nice and funny.keep up the good work

Caveo_Eminor
08-03-2003, 01:20 PM
lol, I love it !

lord_samot
08-03-2003, 01:43 PM
All i can say is weird but kool

Achielles
08-03-2003, 04:22 PM
Daydreaming about elephants...oh the life of Grish!

-Grish-
08-04-2003, 02:37 AM
Yes its weird, but i wrote that out of thinking of DnL.... maybe you can ride elephants?

Kagda
08-04-2003, 07:03 AM
in imoral words of Caveo.. I LOVE IT !
haha, i hope you write some more, hehe, and to me, Strange is good, so is wierd. so keep up the good job, and riding elephants would be cool :)

windwalker
08-05-2003, 11:54 AM
That was realy creative -Grish-,and funny too lol WTG. ;)

Catz
11-03-2003, 07:07 PM
This poem have been gathered by librarians from The Library of Ganareth

ufokid
12-04-2003, 10:17 PM
Maaaaaaaaaaarvelous.

Aethelwulf
12-04-2003, 10:19 PM
What a hoot! Well done...brought a grin ..

Tinok
12-04-2003, 10:20 PM
I like it! Also, I love the sig!

Nevar_Darkmoon
12-05-2003, 01:29 AM
Elephant poetry. Whoed a thunk it?

I dont know if you should write for Dr.Sues or for the immortal R. Sillverstine, but its brilliant.

If all half-trolls have the wits you have... may need to look at bringing a few on into the Gaurd.

edit: Called grish a half orc.. not a half troll.. Opps.

[Edited on 5/12/2003 by Nevar_Darkmoon]

SiriaCessmera
12-05-2003, 02:19 AM
I'd say Dr. Seuss with a more sinister twist. Great poem really, it is extremelty creative!
I wouldn't mind reading another, if you happen to have one ;) .

DigitalMastermind
12-05-2003, 02:41 PM
Dr. Seuss was a sick sick man... or am I thinkin' of Mike Meyers? :P